Group members: Akilah Fahad, Safia Choukah, Alfie Dennehy Vazquez, Amelia Fell, Ian Lu
For our collaborative project, we got into a group of 5 and started brainstorming and coming up with quickfire ideas for a 20 second animation using the words we chose from the word bubble provided to us: greed, decay, forget, awaken, commotion, silence.

We decided to go for a bittersweet and sad story where the main character is a doll who is chipped and broken, and she tries to put herself back together but ultimately fails. We then came up with a logline together as a group to solidify our idea of our animation- Broken and forgotten, a small doll awakens after years of loneliness in an attic and desperately tries to put her fractured self back together, accompanied only by her memories of a better time. Our next task was to start coming up with some designs for the doll, and I created a detailed design for our main character based on all of our brainstorming.

My groupmates liked the design, however this design had far too much detail to animate easily, so I simplified it a lot more.

My group members seemed to like the simplified design, so we all started drawing the doll in our own styles to see what would be the ideal way to draw her, and what parts of the doll we should keep into consideration when drawing her and what rules to stick to.



Next, we started coming up with a storyboard for the animation, and we each made our own, and then compared each others storyboards and pointed out what we liked from each version and compiled it into a video so we could see how well it would play out.


After making a really brief draft of the story using everyone’s storyboards, Amelia and Saf made a second draft of the animation.
After this, Saf and I made a cleaner animatic of the storyboard and put it together, and this would be used as a reference for the animation. I had done the first 10 seconds of the animatic.
Before we started animating, we had to choose the colour palette for our doll, so I played around with a few different colour combinations for our doll. We all agreed to use the first colour scheme, but a little less bright.

We also had to come up with a design for the doll’s owner, which Amelia took charge of. She also made us a range of colour palettes to choose from, and we all liked the colour scheme labelled ‘1’.

Then, Amelia gave us a few variations of that colour palette but in different ways, and we chose the variation labelled ‘3’.

From this point, we assigned different parts of the animation between all of our group members, and we will all be using toon boom for animating.
Alfie: sound effects, backgrounds, title screen, and post production.
Ian: music and first quarter of animation – doll waking up, looking around in confusion and spotting her arm.
Me: second quarter of animation – approaching the arm, and reaching out to it, and attempting to attach the arm.
Amelia: third quarter of animation – flashback of the doll’s owner crying and gluing her broken arm back on.
Saf: fourth quarter of animation – loop in the credits where she is trying to put her arm back on but it keeps falling off.
All of us had a sightly different way of working, but I had started off with a sketch, to rough out the shapes and establish the shots and composition, then did cleaner lineart using a vector brush. Once the lineart was complete, I bucket filled the colours of the doll with the colour pallet we collectively agreed with on a vector layer. I had finished my section of the animation pretty early on, so I offered to do some of Ian’s assigned section of the animation as they seemed to be struggling with the workload. Amelia, Alfie and Saf had finished their assigned parts of the animation (and in amazing quality!), and we started compiling each animated clip together. Unfortunately, Ian failed to provide us with any of his section of the animation, and as the submission date was getting near, Saf volunteered to do Ian’s share of the animation as well as their own. Once the clips were all together, and edited slightly on premiere pro, we started adding the music and cropping parts of the song so that it would fit with the animation.
Ian had told us that he had previously composed this piece of music when we were still coming up for the plot of the doll, and we thought this would be a great, however much later we had found that he did not create this piece, and it is actually a piece from a royalty free music site. The name of the piece is called “Comfortable Mystery” by Kevin MacLeod (incompetech.com). Unfortunately, we did not have enough time to create a new piece from scratch as it was too close to the the submission time, but we spoke to Ben about it and he allowed us to use the piece for our project. Lastly, Alfie had then added the final touches to the animation, and the title and credits. We are all very happy with how the animation came out, and I like that we were able to indicate such a clear narrative/story in such a short animation. 😀